hypnotic drip
(Hypnotic, Drip, Sulk)
The Water Torturer paid me no heed as he went about his business. The steady drip of the water on my forehead did not send me into a screaming confession of the secrets he so desperately needed. Instead, the drips were hypnotic and put me into a peaceful slumber. When I awoke, I swear he was sulking.
Bite Me 
July 15, 2009 at 7:18 pm
i actually did that big laugh thing i do at the end.
July 15, 2009 at 7:23 pm
that’s ok, Nichole had to help me with your instructions also. total computer loser
July 15, 2009 at 11:28 pm
Looks like you turned the tables on the water torturer!
July 15, 2009 at 11:35 pm
ha! we used to play that game during sleepovers. Snoozed everytime
July 16, 2009 at 12:37 am
clever use of the words!
July 16, 2009 at 12:50 am
just a parlor trick. I love your work. Heresy is now a shortcut. that was a good cry/ Thanx
July 16, 2009 at 12:52 am
yummy. What a wonderful take on the words. Thanks for a big smile.
July 16, 2009 at 12:57 am
my pleasure
July 16, 2009 at 12:52 am
I did a little story with the same aspects as your story, but it’s not nearly as good. Great job!
July 16, 2009 at 12:58 am
Hey, don’t say that. Your’s was fantastic because it was YOURS. THANX
July 16, 2009 at 2:01 am
Love this! It’s so clever and RIGHT!
July 16, 2009 at 2:13 pm
thanx! it was my first time!
July 16, 2009 at 2:33 am
This really was a treat.
July 16, 2009 at 2:13 pm
chinese water torture is a treat? Hmmm…thanx
July 16, 2009 at 7:18 pm
Got a good chuckle at the tables being turned…
July 17, 2009 at 8:08 am
lol 😀
this was nicely done. looks like u tortured the water torturer!! 😀
Leo
July 18, 2009 at 3:37 pm
I enjoyed it very much!
dragon rider
July 20, 2009 at 10:36 pm
as a steady rain…i like that thought… the next time i see another pix of so called water torture i’ll think of yr story…